My first set of thumbnails are mainly based on the first excerpt of 'She' I was given. This means that I have created a lot of scenes outside of the city and of large open landscapes. Whereas the second book excerpt is a lot more confined in terms of space in the thumbnails due to the characters being in small caves and tunnels.
Hey Will :)
ReplyDeleteRemember to number your thumbs, so people can respond quickly; for example, I like the sense of depth you've created in the third thumbnail down on the left (but that would have been easier to describe via a number!)
Also - tip - worry less about characters and people, and more about the spaces .